Edwin,
Has made a few mistakes in his resume. No fear though. These can all be resolved.
First off Edwin is listing the obvious. In the job description employers like to see what you have done for the company. For example, raised profits 15% or helped lower overhead by 11% by.... Also, in Edwin's resume he has to many types of jobs. He looks as if he has been going job to job and is trying to find himself. You may have to change each resume for each job that you apply for. Employers want to see what qualities you have the ability to bring into the new company.
Stay tuned because we will have another critique soon.
-Rotten Resume
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Very often, your cover letter will be the first thing that a recruiter looks at when he sits down to do that all-important first sift. It is your first opportunity to leave a lasting and favorable impression and as such it should work every bit as hard as your resume, if not more so, to convince him that you are the best match for the job. Remember, the employer is looking for a really outstanding candidate and if your cover letter is in any way sub-standard or does nothing to tempt him into reading your resume, then he will not waste any further time on your application.